Venture Industries

[thisclose to arching the paper boy...]

I wrote this for Chris for the Holidays - it's really nothing more than a ficlet in which 21 and Triana share an odd Thanksgiving meal at the Compound. I was hoping it'd be more detailed, but they decided they wanted to be suscint. And surprisingly cute.

[OriginalDean Venture]

First of all, thank you very much for this present! I have a really hard time writing stuff to order; I admire anyone who can do it.

Short, that's true, but well-written. The dialogue is funny, and what description there is is good. Both of them are in character, and you've got 21 down perfectly. I could hear his voice saying it. Triana's final line is very heart-warming.

Nothing is bad about this fic. Something longer would have been nice, but this story is as long as its plot demands.

Once more, thanks for adding to the number of good Venture Brothers fanfics our there. That's a present to all of us fans.

[thisclose to arching the paper boy...]

Thank you so much, Chris! And I definitely owe you something longer sometime soon - I'm sorry that this one rolled out in a more minuscule fashion, but I'm glad you liked!